Do you hear the wind, Mother?
I think its calls to me
Declaring seven sailing ships ready
To sail the seven seas –
Do you feel the wind, Mother?
I feel it in my soul
It pulls upon my childhood heart
To soon let childhood go –
With wind and soul
and with heavy heart
I look into your eyes – Mother,
did you know the time would
come for bittersweet good-byes?
Did you know life’s sailing ships
would anchor in the night,
to carrying away a lifetime of dreams
in such a fateful flight?
Do you see the sails, Mother?
I see them in the harbor
The ships are ready to pull anchor
My childhood no more can linger –
bkmackenzie
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Thought I would submit a piece of my children's poetry this week....Monday's Child
this is one of my favorites..the illustration and this poem...
Illustration by: Florence Edith Storer
I think its calls to me
Declaring seven sailing ships ready
To sail the seven seas –
Do you feel the wind, Mother?
I feel it in my soul
It pulls upon my childhood heart
To soon let childhood go –
With wind and soul
and with heavy heart
I look into your eyes – Mother,
did you know the time would
come for bittersweet good-byes?
Did you know life’s sailing ships
would anchor in the night,
to carrying away a lifetime of dreams
in such a fateful flight?
Do you see the sails, Mother?
I see them in the harbor
The ships are ready to pull anchor
My childhood no more can linger –
bkmackenzie
copyrighted
Thought I would submit a piece of my children's poetry this week....Monday's Child
this is one of my favorites..the illustration and this poem...
Illustration by: Florence Edith Storer
Oh, how lovely! Thank you for leaving link at Red Ted Art ;-)
ReplyDeleteMaggy x
A children's poem for adults - what mother hasn't had those thoughts as she watches her baby slip away into childhood, then adolescence and onward. If one is lucky, the ship comes back, carrying grandchildren.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the John Denver song about the wind. I love when nature and love of children coincide; two of my favorite things. Thanks for visiting me at www.mydeartrash.blogspot.com. I'll be back.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is simply beautiful and I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Red, Pondside, Laura and Viola - I do thank you and this is one of my favorites - it reminds me of my children and wanting to keep them near knowing their need to be who they were created to be....blessings to you all...bkm
ReplyDeleteThis is a deep thinking tale of relationship. loved it.
ReplyDeletePutting words to this growing-up thing is hard... but these say so much, written on the wind as they are.
ReplyDeletethat last line rings heavy for me...time to put away the toys...wonderful write...and thanks for linking up to oneshot!
ReplyDeleteThis was fun and greatly written. Very nice piece
ReplyDeleteI beary much loved this poem! It brought me back to when I was little and my Mom used to read to me.
ReplyDeleteLovely and lyrical!
ReplyDeleteThis is delightful, like a child's verse, but with an adult's understanding. I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone, Talon, Kira, Brian, Caty, and Titanum and of course Anthony...thank you...much
ReplyDeleteThanks Patti, I appreciate you comments too...I do really enjoy your work..bkm
Your lines took me back a bit and got me thinking about my daughter when she was a child and how she is now at seventeen.
ReplyDelete"My childhood no more can linger"
That is such a ponderous, weighty and meaty line rather janus like ponting both forwrds and backwards
I read this wanting to read it to my children but the more i read it the more i understood that it really was for me...as pondside said "a childs poem for adults"..an excellent poem..cheers bkm
ReplyDeleteLove how the speaker is pointing out the signs of leaving to the mother, as if she needs to truly consider what looms on the horizon. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteCheers
mothers always see the ship first
ReplyDeletebut sometimes don't want to tell
what they see
Lovely poem of seperation that must be
oh bittersweet passage of time. I want to hold my babies closer, but know that one day the ship will come to sail them off on their own paths. Reminds me of Khalil Gibran a hint.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting BKM
Oh a poem filled with emotions and relationship, it really touches my heart and it been a wonderful read:) how i wish i can return to my childhood years:3
ReplyDeleteMy ship has sailed and won't return
ReplyDeleteFor my childhood has gone to sea
We weight anchor last night
And sailed at first light
Mother pray for me
As I face the raging sea
Oh -oh - had to fight the tears - because my eldest daughter is about to set sail - and will leave in 3 weeks for Bolivia - for a whole year - and yes - my motherheart is heavy...
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem. It captures both the feelings of the child and in essence the mother. It is difficult for any mother to let her kids fly. But I really liked the part that captured a child realizing that they were turning into an adult. That is a most difficult time.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your comments...it really is hard for both child and mother .. yet to hold on to them, we would cripple them...and that is not our calling...bkm
ReplyDeletevery touching write... beautifully written and expressed.
ReplyDeleteAawww.. that was beautiful and moving, bkm !
ReplyDeleteChildhood beckons...over and over again.. and as much as we want to go back to it, the facts remain!
A lovely poem!!
Thank oyu for sharing this one..
sweet read..you have a very nice blog here too! love the outline and the content! touched..:)
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