Thursday, July 8, 2010

Do You Hear the Wind? -Monday's Child #41

Do you hear the wind, Mother?
I think its calls to me
Declaring seven sailing ships ready
To sail the seven seas –

Do you feel the wind, Mother?
I feel it in my soul
It pulls upon my childhood heart
To soon let childhood go –

With wind and soul
and with heavy heart
I look into your eyes – Mother,
did you know the time would
come for bittersweet good-byes?

Did you know life’s sailing ships
would anchor in the night,
to carrying away a lifetime of dreams
in such a fateful flight?

Do you see the sails, Mother?
I see them in the harbor
The ships are ready to pull anchor
My childhood no more can linger –

bkmackenzie
copyrighted

Thought I would submit a piece of my children's poetry this week....Monday's Child
this is one of my favorites..the illustration and this poem...

Illustration by: Florence Edith Storer

26 comments:

  1. Oh, how lovely! Thank you for leaving link at Red Ted Art ;-)

    Maggy x

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  2. A children's poem for adults - what mother hasn't had those thoughts as she watches her baby slip away into childhood, then adolescence and onward. If one is lucky, the ship comes back, carrying grandchildren.

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  3. Reminds me of the John Denver song about the wind. I love when nature and love of children coincide; two of my favorite things. Thanks for visiting me at www.mydeartrash.blogspot.com. I'll be back.

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  4. This poem is simply beautiful and I loved it.

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  5. Thank you Red, Pondside, Laura and Viola - I do thank you and this is one of my favorites - it reminds me of my children and wanting to keep them near knowing their need to be who they were created to be....blessings to you all...bkm

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  6. This is a deep thinking tale of relationship. loved it.

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  7. Putting words to this growing-up thing is hard... but these say so much, written on the wind as they are.

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  8. that last line rings heavy for me...time to put away the toys...wonderful write...and thanks for linking up to oneshot!

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  9. This was fun and greatly written. Very nice piece

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  10. I beary much loved this poem! It brought me back to when I was little and my Mom used to read to me.

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  11. This is delightful, like a child's verse, but with an adult's understanding. I really liked it.

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  12. Thank you everyone, Talon, Kira, Brian, Caty, and Titanum and of course Anthony...thank you...much

    Thanks Patti, I appreciate you comments too...I do really enjoy your work..bkm

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  13. Your lines took me back a bit and got me thinking about my daughter when she was a child and how she is now at seventeen.
    "My childhood no more can linger"
    That is such a ponderous, weighty and meaty line rather janus like ponting both forwrds and backwards

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  14. I read this wanting to read it to my children but the more i read it the more i understood that it really was for me...as pondside said "a childs poem for adults"..an excellent poem..cheers bkm

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  15. Love how the speaker is pointing out the signs of leaving to the mother, as if she needs to truly consider what looms on the horizon. Very well done.
    Cheers

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  16. mothers always see the ship first
    but sometimes don't want to tell
    what they see

    Lovely poem of seperation that must be

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  17. oh bittersweet passage of time. I want to hold my babies closer, but know that one day the ship will come to sail them off on their own paths. Reminds me of Khalil Gibran a hint.
    Thanks for visiting BKM

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  18. Oh a poem filled with emotions and relationship, it really touches my heart and it been a wonderful read:) how i wish i can return to my childhood years:3

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  19. My ship has sailed and won't return
    For my childhood has gone to sea
    We weight anchor last night
    And sailed at first light
    Mother pray for me
    As I face the raging sea

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  20. Oh -oh - had to fight the tears - because my eldest daughter is about to set sail - and will leave in 3 weeks for Bolivia - for a whole year - and yes - my motherheart is heavy...

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  21. What a wonderful poem. It captures both the feelings of the child and in essence the mother. It is difficult for any mother to let her kids fly. But I really liked the part that captured a child realizing that they were turning into an adult. That is a most difficult time.

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  22. Thank you all for your comments...it really is hard for both child and mother .. yet to hold on to them, we would cripple them...and that is not our calling...bkm

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  23. very touching write... beautifully written and expressed.

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  24. Aawww.. that was beautiful and moving, bkm !
    Childhood beckons...over and over again.. and as much as we want to go back to it, the facts remain!
    A lovely poem!!
    Thank oyu for sharing this one..

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  25. sweet read..you have a very nice blog here too! love the outline and the content! touched..:)

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