The sun bowed down to the Harvest moon,
on a cold October night -
and the wing of Crow sought shelter
as the Owls wing took flight.
The shadows of the barnyard
grew tall, and long and lean - when
the farmers cat ran to the wood pile
and let out a rancid scream.
Then silence gave voice to a beating heart,
as goblins approached the door - where
a skeleton hung his weary bones
that carried flesh years before.
Laughing faces of Jack -O- Lanterns
welcomed the unearthly guests - to
the opening of the mansion
where stood the Witch who knew
no rest.
Her smile long and painful
seemed as if to say, “So my little friends,
did you come here to stay?”
But, she held back her darkside mumbling
“ Well, my dears what could you darlings be?”
The bigger goblin answered quickly,
“I am a pirate, and this is Cinderella,
my sister – she just turned three.”
Tricks there were none for the moment,
as treats filled the goblins purse -
and they ran as fast as they could
in fear of the Old Witches curse.
Then darkness slipped past midnight -
and the Wise Old Gnome crawled
out from the woods –
retracting the spell of the season –
calling all spirits now to be good.
The fairies came forth from their refuge
and flew towards the night sky-
to sparkle and watch over
all the sleeping goblins.
Now that Halloween has passed by -
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2008
Oh I loved this poem. I love Halloween too.
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Wysteria
what a wonderful poem! I love the rhythm.
ReplyDeletethank you for stopping by my blog today and leaving your words of encouragement
Hopefully I'll see you again
I look forward to reading more of you poetry
take care
Hope
Cute! I never expected fairies to be in this halloweenish tale. Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteA spooky halloween tale with a great ending - loved the form, rhythm...
ReplyDeletespooky sweet, what a Halloween treat :)
ReplyDeleteReally well written, nice flow,rhyming and a fun Halloween story.
ReplyDeleteVictoria
Mine is here:
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/jingles-poetry-potluck-all-hallows-eve/
Really love this, maybe more so because my daughter hovers between the scarier elements at 4 and now the attempt to "unscare" her senses at least to some degree. You made Halloween sweet! Excellent writing =)) ~April
ReplyDeletewhat a wonderful, spooky, enjoyable read...thanks for sharing and joining in the fun...pete
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful, I enjoyd reading it... thanks for sharing BKM, the last para was great..
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vivid description of Halloween spirits,
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a perfect scary movie clip for kids.
wow! great!how i wish i could write like this!
ReplyDeletegreat spooky Halloween poem!
ReplyDeleteLots of Halloween fun - nice Potluck entry!
ReplyDeletethis was fun and cute, and very well written. It had a "Hansel and Gretel" feel.
ReplyDeleteThat is a sweet poem and so perfect for Halloween. That would make a great card :) I just loved that!
ReplyDeleteA beautifully written fun poem. Cheers bkm :)
ReplyDeleteNice Halloween Poem. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThe rhyming, the rhythm, the flow - Hallowe'en perfect, bkm!
ReplyDeleteWhimsical! It almost makes me want to be a child again. :)
ReplyDeleteI was really beginning to think of the curse, and where the poem's headed! But then all ended well.. and I am glad it did!
ReplyDelete"Then silence gave voice to a beating heart" -- I really liked this particular line a lot!! It had so much depth to it...
I really enjoyed the gripping nature of the poem.. felt like I was reading a mystery book!
Thanks a ton for sharing it with poetry potluck, bkm...
:)
Magical.. Timeless and beautifully written. Whilst reading it makes me feel all young, bubbly and innocent again ;0)
ReplyDeleteWhat fun and I think I will make our own little book of your wonderful poems. Thank you for making that offer. Of course, if you ever publish one, I will be one of the first to buy it!
ReplyDeleteMargaret Thank you so much for your wonderful comment...maybe someday I will self publish a Children's Book...even if only to have them all put together...bkm
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