Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Amazing --Monday's Child #13



Is it not Amazing? this Universe of Ours
filled with all these planets
and millions of shining Stars

Is it not Amazing? the beauty of it All
 colors blue, green to yellow
as we stand on our own bright ball
Circling through the Milky Way
like floating on a cloud
our hearts thumping like the thunder
young and strong and proud

to look upon this sight
given by the hand
of an Awesome Creator
that is truly Amazing
Is it not? my dear friend.....

bkmackenzie
2010

Posted for Monday's Child #13 and Alphabe-thursday...letter A



24 comments:

  1. Exceedingly amazing! And we take it so much for granted :(

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  2. Love your ‘A’ post - words and image are so expressive!

    Have a great weekend,

    LOLA:)

    btw My quick Alphabe-Thursday link is here

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  3. I love the picture and the words you wrote to go with it. It is all truly amazing.

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  4. I understand. I had to read it twice, I lost myself...(not your fault) Nice work!!!!

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  5. I just love your children's poetry! This is Amazing (with a capital A)!
    Teresa

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  6. It's beary nice to be here. Sweet blog. Have a good week! La

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  7. I hope I didn't already comment, I have been having a lot of trouble with blogs tonight. I had to read this twice, I loved it, but I was confused at one point. It was not your writing it was my brain...it has been a long day!

    Lovely A post!!!

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  8. yes, so amazing, such a lovely poem!

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  9. Wonderful poetry! Poetic verses are strings attached to the heart. I love it! Thanks for sharing.

    Anne-Marie

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  10. Absolutely completely amazing!!!!

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  11. i can imagine the beauty of the Milky Way through your poem. lovely work!

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  12. Truly amazing! Great job!
    Happy Alphabet Day!
    Coralie

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  13. Wow! As seen though the eyes of a child. Do we lose that perspective as adults? Very good!~Ames

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  14. Boy, you and I are on the same track this week! Loved this little poem....and the picture that accompanies it.

    =)

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  15. I love the illustration you put with this! It just completes the whole picture. Very nice =)

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  16. As usual, you are amazing...

    love it love it love it

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  17. I love your blog theme, It's so cute !

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  18. What a beautiful post.

    The visualization in this poem is astounding. Are you entering your work into poetry contests? I always see them but poetry isn't my strong point in writing.

    The illustration was amazing and perfect for your words.

    Thank you for linking.

    A+

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  19. Yes it is amazing!! ... just lovely :o)

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  20. Lovely,both the poem and the illustration.

    Visiting from Jenny's blog.

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  21. This is dreamy! Love the words and meanings. Beautiful.

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