Sunday, December 12, 2010

The Forgotten Christmas Tree



In a time no longer remembered
Behind a door marked Midnight
There stood a Christmas tree
Who had lost its sparkling Christmas Light

Where the Christmas Wishes were hung
But the world could not see
Belonging to all the little children
Of the Forgotten Christmas Tree

These children huddled beneath its branches
To take shelter from cold nights
Awaiting with wide and hopeful eyes
The return of the beautiful Christmas Light

They held tight to each others hands
The tiny ones frightened by the dark
Making sure to stay clear of the great door
That claimed Midnight as its mark

They knew not what could lie
Beyond the darkness of the door
Only that it had been a hundred years
Since it had been opened, maybe more

Then on an extra cold and dreary night
A bitter snowy wind began to blow
And they all gathered hiding within the tree
Having no other place to go

Clinging to each others jackets
In fear they would all blow away
They tried not to be frightened
As its great branches started to sway

The tree was losing strength
And certain soon lost they all would be
They gathered up their Christmas Wishes
Looking straight to the top of the Forgotten Tree

Then each child read their Christmas Wish
Aloud, clear enough for all the world to hear
And with it sent their faith and love
To all the lost hearts whether far or near

Soon in the wind there rang a sound
From the other side of the Midnight door
Faint then louder as it came near
And suddenly they were not frightened anymore

The children’s hearts became quiet and still
As they listened to the sound of wings taking flight
“They are coming, they are coming,” the children cried
“They are bringing the Christmas Light

The air grew calm, as peace filled the air
And slowly the Midnight door began to open wide
Spilling Christmas Love and Christmas Light
As a thousand angel wings carried Joyous Yule Tide

With One Little Angel taking his place
On the very top of the Forgotten Tree
Where he will remain forever for all who are lost
As a beacon of Christmas Faith, Hope and Love
For the whole world to see…


bkmackenzie
copyrighted
2008

This is my Christmas Poem to the world - I wrote it a couple of years ago now, I dedicate this to my Children who I Love so very much, and to all the children of the world.  
  May Everyone at One Shot Poetry have a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Year......So happy to have been a part of this wonderful community of writers and artists......bkm


 

23 comments:

  1. wow! A beautiful story. wonderfully written poem! Imagery is vivid. I thought it would make a great t.v. cartoon. Flows magically!
    thank you

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  2. Thanks Hope...this is my answer to the Night Before Christmas...would love to have it published one day....bkm

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  3. In a time no longer remembered, straight to the point

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  4. Amazing images, powerful words, touched deep within my heart calling for me to see the Christmas Light... thinking of children lost, waiting for the Midnight hour.

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  5. Just beautiful, magical and wonderful to read, I loved it!

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  6. Beautiful story, beautifully told!

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  7. Beautiful, you have an amazing talent. Thank you for sharing. Truly beautiful.

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  8. Hi again!

    Great ‘L’ post - great story. Happy Alphabe-Thursday!

    Wishing you a great weekend ahead & looking forward to *seeing* you again!

    LOLA:)

    Btw Your quick Alphabe-Thursday link

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  9. Darn girl. You made me cry here.

    This was lovely. Really beautiful imagery and a wonderful link to Alphabe-Thursday!

    Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

    A+

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  10. what a beautiful read ... i enjoyed this so much

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  11. Gorgeously written and such a treat to read. Great post!!

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  12. This is an amazing tale you've woven. I love it!

    Teresa

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  13. I am so glad the door opened and their wishes were answered. Wonderful post!

    Please stop by and check out my L post. It will be up tomorrow.

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  14. lovely light poem...
    powerful and emotional.
    Thanks.

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  15. What a sweet poem! It is well worth filing away for future reference. Thank you!

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  16. Merry Christmas, and thanks for bringing that Christmas light to your readers!

    =)

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  17. I enjoyed your post. I think I'll go back and reread it. Merry Christmas!~Ames

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  18. It would be fun to read this aloud to a group of children.

    Merry Christmas!

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  19. ...and the spirit of Christmas lives on. I love your light.

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  20. How lovely!!! :)http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/01/05/i-choose/#comment-1135

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  21. An absolutely wonderful read. What talent you have!

    Love the bears too...)

    Wysteria

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